Another goodie, Chrissie. I’ve never been comfortable though with two stacked panels followed by a single panel two-panels high – never too sure where to go after the first panel (unless the tier continues after the third panel). I did the same in Inside Outsiders and was so troubled by it that I re-scripted so the second and third panels could read in reverse order. Unlike the similar panel layout in the previous Comicana episode, composition in the high panel of this one kinda divides and stacks the panel in two, accentuating my initial confusion. You might consider the addition of a downward-pointing arrow in panel 3 of the page. Otherwise, liking your work!
This latest episode is so true with some folks…lol.
Nice look at the “real” versus “cyber” realities.
(“j)
Garen
I’ve been reading your strips whenever you post a link and really enjoying them. The end result always belies the hard work, swearing, insecurity and tears that goes into these things… well, for me anyway! They’re great, and I’m really pleased to see you producing stuff.
Another goodie, Chrissie. I’ve never been comfortable though with two stacked panels followed by a single panel two-panels high – never too sure where to go after the first panel (unless the tier continues after the third panel). I did the same in Inside Outsiders and was so troubled by it that I re-scripted so the second and third panels could read in reverse order. Unlike the similar panel layout in the previous Comicana episode, composition in the high panel of this one kinda divides and stacks the panel in two, accentuating my initial confusion. You might consider the addition of a downward-pointing arrow in panel 3 of the page. Otherwise, liking your work!
This latest episode is so true with some folks…lol.
Nice look at the “real” versus “cyber” realities.
(“j)
I’ve been reading your strips whenever you post a link and really enjoying them. The end result always belies the hard work, swearing, insecurity and tears that goes into these things… well, for me anyway! They’re great, and I’m really pleased to see you producing stuff.
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